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Post 15.03.2006 00:28:29 
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desi4eva
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EMPTINESS

feeling ritten in words... hope u guyz enjoy it

She looks at her world, the tears fill her eyes.

She thinks she should be happy, yet still she cries.

The emptiness fills her and that she can’t hide.

She tries to bury the longing down deep inside.

She tries to get along through another long day.

Yet she wonders, there just has to be another way.

Is this all that life was supposed to be.

She knows there is much more that she truly needs.

Yet she remains silent until the very end.

The broken dreams she just can’t seem to mend.

The sun is setting, it’s getting  very late.

She prays to God, "Please don’t let the love turn into hate."

Post 19.01.2006 12:11:47 
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WAA WAA Desi Jaan

What a great meaningfull poem !

Love it ...Thanks!


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Post 19.01.2006 18:34:04 
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afgprincess90
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WOW NICE POEM!

who new you had a soft side in you.lozz

take care


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Post 20.01.2006 00:50:57 
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lisha
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aw desi wat shall i say?.erm wicked dudekeep it up huni.ur learning


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Post 20.01.2006 01:04:02 
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WOW NICE POEM!

who new you had a soft side in you.lozz

take care

----------- it is all above desi jaan


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Post 20.01.2006 01:47:04 
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kabotareshq
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very nice peom jan tnx for sharing:)


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Post 20.01.2006 01:48:09 
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desi4eva
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lolzz thnxx guyz... for all ur nice sweet words..

n for u lish.. just shush it.. i aint lernin... the college u goin to i had been the prof there... so u gotta do the learning n i gotta do the teachin .. lolz

Post 20.01.2006 06:46:19 
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lisha
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now now noo need to get harsh,m i men i shud be wathcing wrestling..man blooodi cat fight.ja

but boy cheer up huni thers nothin wrong wiv teh colj and the prof


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Post 21.01.2006 01:40:35 
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